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Slide Makeover of the Month: March 2014

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A common mistake is to show the wrong type of data in a pie chart. Here’s what to look for and how to fix it.

Before

Bad pie chart slide

A typical pie chart, right? Well, this slide has some problems, with too much text and a very unhelpful title. But the biggest problem is the way the pie chart is used. Pie charts are meant to represent fractions of a whole. So if you’re comparing numbers, they need to be expressed as percentages so that the pie chart makes sense.

There’s something else wrong with this slide. It might not be apparent to you right now, but I guarantee you that the problem will become very obvious when you see the video!

After

We rewrite the slide title, delete unnecessary copy, fix the pie chart, and get rid of a needless distraction.

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